hello my lovely amazing astonishing blog comments and blog viewers welcome people that usually read my blog and welcome new commenters and newcomers my name is briar i am a year six from yaldhurst model school as as you can tell by the title i am going to be telling you about the amazing wonders of poems now heer is my wonderes poem
if i was cloud i would be so fluffy
if i was cloud i would be so puffy
if i was cloud i would be so warm
if i was cloud i would be so nice
if i was cloud i would give the little kids piggy back rids
if i was cloud i would rain on the hottest days
and if i was cloud i would make it sunny on the coldest days
if i was cloud i would be so fluffy
if i was cloud i would be so puffy
if i was cloud i would be so warm
if i was cloud i would be so nice
if i was cloud i would give the little kids piggy back rids
if i was cloud i would rain on the hottest days
and if i was cloud i would make it sunny on the coldest days
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